White Album 2/Script/2509

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Not sure about運命の分岐点のうちの or what it refers to (Helped by Isaac) Having a hard time trying to find the proper translation for ブッチしてる Maybe it would be better to localize it to "you can go home now," the decision is up to you. "Nah, fuck that - K" Not sure if I should really keep the last sentence like that since he's unlikely to get lost but "don't lose your way" also sounds off to me. She's not referring to his house anyways, so I guess it sounds like a hint. *NOTE: Here is where Haruki changes the date in his text message from tomorrow to the day after tomorrow. Even though this is how it should be, something in my head is telling me that I suck at writing laughing onomatopoeia. I don't think the ruby text is necessary here. Preface from henceforth: I will suck at translating these lines, even if it's not an H scene. Having trouble getting to the meaning of がっちり <-Phirb. I did change the line -Nekiko This could probably be localized better. I feel like I just scraped the gist of the sentence with this translation. There are many words that are hard to understand and piece together in English. Kind of confused with 切り込んで I tried to keep the style of the sentence by adding tips in. Not confident about the meaning of 伸ばされていく I'm having trouble rephrasing stream to something better, you can probably come up with something a lot better. I'm having a hard time coming up with a good adjective in place of 肉付きのいい that doesn't sound overly sexual or silly. I wanted to put "my old man" but I think it would be uncharacteristic of Haruki to talk about his parents, especially interacting with them. It bothers me that perfume isn't used here, but if that's what she used then shouganai レディコミ is apparently manga geared towards women. I can't for the life of me phrase the ending well, unless if I straight up said he was getting wet.

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