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|それなのに、今では悲しいほど周囲から忘れ去られてる、<br>普通科の、卒業も危うい劣等生。
  
|それなのに、今では悲しいほど周囲から忘れ去られてる、<br>普通科の、卒業も危うい劣等生。
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|And yet, nowadays she's been abandoned by everyone that it's saddening. An underachiever in the regular curriculum, who might not even graduate.
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|And yet, it's saddening to see how she's been abandoned by everyone. An underachiever in the regular curriculum, who might not even graduate.
 
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|1154|春希|Haruki
  
|1154|春希|Haruki
 
|「だったら今度も俺が『どうしても』って言うから、<br>仕方なく目立ってくれ」
  
|「だったら今度も俺が『どうしても』って言うから、<br>仕方なく目立ってくれ」
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|"That's why this time, I want you to stand out no matter what, got it?"
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|"That's why, this time, I want you to stand out no matter what, got it?"
 
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|冬馬のことをよく知らない多くの同級生たち。<br>悪い部分だけをよく知ってる音楽科の同級生たち。<br>親の七光だけだと思っている一部の教師たち。
  
|冬馬のことをよく知らない多くの同級生たち。<br>悪い部分だけをよく知ってる音楽科の同級生たち。<br>親の七光だけだと思っている一部の教師たち。
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|All those students who don't know Touma well. The music students who only know her bad side. The teachers who believe she's living off her mother's fame.
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|All those students who don't know Touma well. The music students who only know her bad sides. The teachers who believe she's living off of her mother's fame.
 
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|鼻をあかしてやりたい。<br>悔しがらせてやりたい。<br>自分たちの目が節穴だったと思い知らせてやりたい。
  
|鼻をあかしてやりたい。<br>悔しがらせてやりたい。<br>自分たちの目が節穴だったと思い知らせてやりたい。
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|I want to bloody their noses. I want to mortify them. I want to get even with them, and shock them so much they can only give blank stares.
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|I want to hit them on their noses. I want to mortify them. I want to get even with them, and shock them so much they can only stare.
 
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|1193|かずさ|Kazusa
  
|1193|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|「いつも通り外しはしないけど、声が出てない。<br>伸びも悪いし、いいとこが全部削がれてる」
  
|「いつも通り外しはしないけど、声が出てない。<br>伸びも悪いし、いいとこが全部削がれてる」
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|"Though you didn't miss any notes as usual, your voice just isn't coming out much. Your tone isn't stretching out, and the overall impression is weak."
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|"Though you didn't miss any notes, as usual, your voice just wasn't dynamic. Your tone isn't stretching out, and the overall impression is weak."
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|Other choices might be: Powerful, foreceful, vigorous, energetc etc, but dynamic covers more of the specter I believe.}}
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|1205|雪菜|Setsuna
  
|1205|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「だから、あっちにばかり手を掛けちゃうんだ。<br>毎日、毎晩」
  
|「だから、あっちにばかり手を掛けちゃうんだ。<br>毎日、毎晩」
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|"That's why you've been leading that someone else. Every day, every night."
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|"That's why you've been leading that 'someone else'. Every day, every night."
 
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|1208|雪菜|Setsuna
  
|1208|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「合宿、昨日が初めてじゃないよね？」
  
|「合宿、昨日が初めてじゃないよね？」
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|"Yesterday wasn't the first day someone stayed over, right?"
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| "Yesterday wasn't the first day that 'someone' stayed over, right?"
 
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|そう、小木曽は午後からずっとこんな感じで<br>なんだか妙にノリが悪かった。
  
|そう、小木曽は午後からずっとこんな感じで<br>なんだか妙にノリが悪かった。
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|That's right, Ogiso hasn't quite been herself since afternoon. She's acting somewhat strange.
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|That's right, Ogiso hasn't quite been herself this afternoon. She's acting somewhat strange.
 
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|1265|春希|Haruki
  
|1265|春希|Haruki
 
|「…本当に疲れてない？<br>それか、体調が悪いとか？」
  
|「…本当に疲れてない？<br>それか、体調が悪いとか？」
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|"... Are you really not tired? Or maybe, are you not feeling well?"
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|"... Are you really not tired? Or maybe, you're not feeling well?"
 
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|何より、語尾の全てに『別に』を付けてくる。<br>これだと、なんだか冬馬っぽい。
  
|何より、語尾の全てに『別に』を付けてくる。<br>これだと、なんだか冬馬っぽい。
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|Above all, she's ending all her sentences with "really." It's somewhat Touma-like.
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|And, she's ending all her sentences with "really." It's somewhat Touma-like.
 
|Literally "not really", but should be based off the sentence composition used for the English translation
  
|Literally "not really", but should be based off the sentence composition used for the English translation
 
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|1289|雪菜|Setsuna
  
|1289|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「誰にでも面倒見がいいことも美点ではあるけれど、<br>ちょっと見方を変えると、\k\n
  
|「誰にでも面倒見がいいことも美点ではあるけれど、<br>ちょっと見方を変えると、\k\n
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|"It's good that you're willing to go the extra mile for others, but on the other hand,\k
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|"It's good that you're willing to go the extra mile for others, but on the other hand,\k\n
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|ADDED \n at the end CHECK CHECK CHECK!!!}}
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|1415|雪菜|Setsuna
  
|1415|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「ううん、本当はわかってる。自業自得だって。<br>それも、馬鹿みたいにくだらない見栄だって」
  
|「ううん、本当はわかってる。自業自得だって。<br>それも、馬鹿みたいにくだらない見栄だって」
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|"No, I do know why. It's reaping what I sow. That's another stupid, worthless façade of mine."
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|"No, I do know why. I'm reaping what I sowed. That's another stupid, worthless façade of mine."
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|"It's reaping what I sow". Isn't it "I'm reaping what I sowed"? The "ç" in "façade" is only shown as a "c" so I wonder if we should change it to "apperance"?}}
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|自分が綺麗になっていくことに<br>心がついていけなかった。
  
|自分が綺麗になっていくことに<br>心がついていけなかった。
 
|Her heart couldn't keep up with the fact that she had become beautiful.
  
|Her heart couldn't keep up with the fact that she had become beautiful.
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|"Her heart" might sound good in Japanese, but I'm not sure the meaning comes through in English.}}
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|1425|雪菜|Setsuna
  
|1425|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「だからわたし、<br>昔の、友達とベタベタしてた頃を思い出しちゃって、<br>こうしてるのが一番楽しいなんて、気づいちゃって…」
  
|「だからわたし、<br>昔の、友達とベタベタしてた頃を思い出しちゃって、<br>こうしてるのが一番楽しいなんて、気づいちゃって…」
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|"And because of that, I remembered how close I was with my friends in the past, and realized I was having the time of my life right now..."
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|"And because of that, I remembered how close I was with my friends in the past, and realized I am having the time of my life right now..."
 
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|小木曽の話は、そこからも何度か脱線を重ね、<br>ときどき要領を得ないエピソードを差し挟みつつ、<br>それでもなんとかシリアスに進行した。
  
|小木曽の話は、そこからも何度か脱線を重ね、<br>ときどき要領を得ないエピソードを差し挟みつつ、<br>それでもなんとかシリアスに進行した。
 
|Ogiso's story went off-topic many times, and digressed into some episodes that weren't all that clear at times, but we moved on seriously.
  
|Ogiso's story went off-topic many times, and digressed into some episodes that weren't all that clear at times, but we moved on seriously.
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|Read from here,}}
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|けれど彼は、仲良し五人組のリーダー格のコが、<br>一年の頃からずっと片想いしていた男の子で。
  
|けれど彼は、仲良し五人組のリーダー格のコが、<br>一年の頃からずっと片想いしていた男の子で。
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|And the fact that the girl who was the leader of their group had an unrequited love for him since first year.
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|And the fact that the girl who was the leader of their group had had an unrequited love for him since first year.
 
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|そこから始まる、単純で陰湿な『仲良し三人組』の友情と、<br>この事態を憂いつつ、どうしたらいいかわからない一人と、<br>そして、独りぼっちの小木曽雪菜。
  
|そこから始まる、単純で陰湿な『仲良し三人組』の友情と、<br>この事態を憂いつつ、どうしたらいいかわからない一人と、<br>そして、独りぼっちの小木曽雪菜。
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|And from there started a simple, insidious friendship of a "close group of three", one person who had no idea what to do with the grief... And Ogiso Setsuna, who was left all alone.
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|Thus started a simple, insidious friendship of a "close group of three", a person who had no idea what to do with the grief... And Ogiso Setsuna, who was left all alone.
 
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|彼女の『たまに電話で話す今でも仲いいコ』は、<br>その時、中立の立場を貫いた、たった一人だけ。
  
|彼女の『たまに電話で話す今でも仲いいコ』は、<br>その時、中立の立場を貫いた、たった一人だけ。
 
|The "nice person she'd talk to once in a while even now" is the one person who had taken a neutral stance at the time.
  
|The "nice person she'd talk to once in a while even now" is the one person who had taken a neutral stance at the time.
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|to here. And see if the wording is right, in English. I can't point to it, but I feel that there's something wrong.}}
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|「俺がそういう人間だって小木曽も知ってるだろ？<br>誰にでも介入して、呆れられて、<br>余計なお世話ばかりで、ウザがられて…」
  
|「俺がそういう人間だって小木曽も知ってるだろ？<br>誰にでも介入して、呆れられて、<br>余計なお世話ばかりで、ウザがられて…」
 
|"You know I'm that sort of person, right, Ogiso? I'm annoying, meddlesome, butt in everyone's business, get people fed up..."
  
|"You know I'm that sort of person, right, Ogiso? I'm annoying, meddlesome, butt in everyone's business, get people fed up..."
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|Hinting to this part of the conversation (line 1511 to 1515): "You know I'm that sort of person, right, Ogiso?", maybe it should be "You know I'm NOT that sort of person, right, Ogiso?"}}
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|1518|雪菜|Setsuna
  
|1518|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「約束だよ？<br>…約束だよ」
  
|「約束だよ？<br>…約束だよ」
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|"You promise...? It's a promise."
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|"You promise...? It's a promise?"
 
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|1549|春希|Haruki
  
|1549|春希|Haruki
 
|「事実だけ言う。<br>何もあるわけがないし、実際ありませんでした」
  
|「事実だけ言う。<br>何もあるわけがないし、実際ありませんでした」
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|"I'm just telling the truth. It's impossible for something to happen, and nothing actually happened."
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|"I'm just telling the truth. It was impossible for something to happen, and nothing actually happened."
 
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|なんだか全身がごっそり疲れ果ててるのに、<br>まるで眠れそうにないくらい目が覚めまくってしまった。
  
|なんだか全身がごっそり疲れ果ててるのに、<br>まるで眠れそうにないくらい目が覚めまくってしまった。
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|My body seems to be completely tired, but I'm so awake it feels like I'll never fall asleep.
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|My body seems to be completely drained, but I'm so awake it feels like I'll never fall asleep.
 
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|寝ておかないと、明日に響くのになぁ…<br>いや、この調子だと、明日も眠くなれるかどうか。
  
|寝ておかないと、明日に響くのになぁ…<br>いや、この調子だと、明日も眠くなれるかどうか。
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|Even though it'll affect me tomorrow if I don't sleep... Well, if this keeps up, I doubt I'll be able to fall asleep tomorrow either.
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|Even though, if I don't sleep, it'll affect me tomorrow... Well, if this keeps up, I doubt I'll be able to fall asleep tomorrow either.
 
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