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|10|？？？|???
  
|10|？？？|???
 
|[F16「やぁ…北原君かぃ？<br>][F16元気にやってるかなぁぁぁ…？」]
  
|[F16「やぁ…北原君かぃ？<br>][F16元気にやってるかなぁぁぁ…？」]
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|"Hello... You're Kitahara-kun, right...?<br>How have you been these days...?"
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|"Ahh... this is Kitahara-kun, right...?<br>How have you been these days...?"
 
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|13|佐藤|Satou
  
|13|佐藤|Satou
 
|「や～助かりました北原さん。<br>ほんと大変だったんすよ。<br>先月でバイトが軒並み辞めたところに店長までも…」
  
|「や～助かりました北原さん。<br>ほんと大変だったんすよ。<br>先月でバイトが軒並み辞めたところに店長までも…」
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|"I really can't thank you enough, Kitahara-san. Things were looking pretty bad. The part-timers from last month all resigned and now even the manager..."
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|"Wow, I really can't thank you enough, Kitahara-san. Things were looking pretty bad. The part-timers from last month all resigned and now even the manager..."
 
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|28|佐藤|Satou
  
|28|佐藤|Satou
 
|「やっぱビシッと言う人がいないと駄目なんすよねぇ。<br>北原さんいないと途端にみんなだらけちゃって」
  
|「やっぱビシッと言う人がいないと駄目なんすよねぇ。<br>北原さんいないと途端にみんなだらけちゃって」
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|"Having someone strict around really is the key to success. Everyone loosened up too much after you left."
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|"Well, having someone strict around really is the key to success. Everyone loosened up too much after you left."
 
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|48|春希|Haruki
  
|48|春希|Haruki
 
|「…だったらわざわざ脅かさないでくれ」
  
|「…だったらわざわざ脅かさないでくれ」
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|"... Then don't try to scare me like that."
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|"...Then don't try to scare me like that."
 
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|54|女子店員１|Female Clerk 1
  
|54|女子店員１|Female Clerk 1
 
|「おはようございま～す…わ、ホントに北原さんだ。<br>お帰りなさ～い」
  
|「おはようございま～す…わ、ホントに北原さんだ。<br>お帰りなさ～い」
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|"Good morning!<br>Wow, it's really you, Kitahara-san. Welcome back!"
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|"Good morning!<br>Wow, it's really you, Kitahara-san! Welcome back!"
 
|}}
  
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|58|春希|Haruki
  
|58|春希|Haruki
 
|「いや、俺単なる臨時教育係で今日だけ…」
  
|「いや、俺単なる臨時教育係で今日だけ…」
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|"Oh no, I'm just going to be supervising the training, that's all."
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|"Oh no, I'm just going to be supervising the training for today, that's all."
 
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|76|春希|Haruki
  
|76|春希|Haruki
 
|「…いや、何てコメントすればいいんだ、それ？」
  
|「…いや、何てコメントすればいいんだ、それ？」
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|"... Um, how exactly did you reach that conclusion?"
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|"...Um, how exactly did you reach that conclusion?"
 
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|78|春希|Haruki
  
|78|春希|Haruki
 
|「……ここのバイトなんてほとんどウチの関係だし」
  
|「……ここのバイトなんてほとんどウチの関係だし」
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|"... Most of the part-timers here are related to our schools in one way or another anyway."
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|"...Most of the part-timers here are related to our schools in one way or another anyway."
 
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|80|春希|Haruki
  
|80|春希|Haruki
 
|「………まさかな」
  
|「………まさかな」
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|"...... No way."
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|"......No way."
 
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|135|春希|Haruki
  
|135|春希|Haruki
 
|「しかし…<br>もう少し愛想よく振舞ってくれないと、<br>とても接客は…」
  
|「しかし…<br>もう少し愛想よく振舞ってくれないと、<br>とても接客は…」
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|Well, now... If you don't lighten up that expression of yours a little, greeting the customers might be a little..."
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|"Well, now... If you don't lighten up that expression of yours a little, greeting the customers might be a little..."
 
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|137|春希|Haruki
  
|137|春希|Haruki
 
|「あ、ああ。<br>俺は基本的に人の足りないところならどこでも…」
  
|「あ、ああ。<br>俺は基本的に人の足りないところならどこでも…」
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|"Y, yeah. I basically took on whatever position was short on people."
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|"Y-yeah. I basically took on whatever position was short on people."
 
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|151||
 
|…そのだらけきった態度を注意したいけど、<br>今はそれどころじゃない。
  
|…そのだらけきった態度を注意したいけど、<br>今はそれどころじゃない。
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|... I'd tell her to watch her slack attitude a little, but now's not the time for that.
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|...I'd tell her to watch her slack attitude a little, but now's not the time for that.
 
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|152|春希|Haruki
  
|152|春希|Haruki
 
|「ちょっと彼女、ホールに入れてあげて。<br>…そうだな、３０分」
  
|「ちょっと彼女、ホールに入れてあげて。<br>…そうだな、３０分」
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|"Let's have her work the hall for a little. <br>... Let's try... 30 minutes for now."
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|"Let's have her work the hall for a little. <br>...Let's try... 30 minutes for now."
 
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|155||
 
|大方の予想通り、二人とも少し不満げな、<br>けれどまったく方向性の違う表情で、俺の顔を凝視する。
  
|大方の予想通り、二人とも少し不満げな、<br>けれどまったく方向性の違う表情で、俺の顔を凝視する。
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|Just as expected, the two of them stare at me with dissatisfied expressions. The reasons behind them however, are completely different.
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|Just as expected, the two of them stare at me with dissatisfied expressions. The reasons behind them, however, are completely different.
 
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|157|中川|Nakagawa
  
|157|中川|Nakagawa
 
|「…出しちゃっていいの？<br>みんな巻き込まれるよ？」
  
|「…出しちゃっていいの？<br>みんな巻き込まれるよ？」
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|"... Can we really send her out? <br>Won't she bother the others?"
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|"...Can we really send her out? <br>Won't she bother the others?"
 
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|166|小春|Koharu
  
|166|小春|Koharu
 
|「ひ…人のこと馬鹿にしないでくださいっ！」
  
|「ひ…人のこと馬鹿にしないでくださいっ！」
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|"... Stop looking down on me like that, please!"
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|"S...Stop looking down on me like that, please!"
 
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|「それはブランクじゃなくて歳…お疲れさまっす！」
  
|「それはブランクじゃなくて歳…お疲れさまっす！」
 
|"That's got less to do with your break than your age... Oh, good work today!"
  
|"That's got less to do with your break than your age... Oh, good work today!"
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|This line feels weird, someone check the TL for me please?}}
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|This line feels weird, someone check the TL for me please? *Phirb: Looks alright to me, though I don't really see why he would say this.}}
   
 
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|とりあえず、狙い通りに鼻が根本からポキリと折れて、<br>日本人らしい容姿に戻ってる杉浦小春の隣に立つ。
  
|とりあえず、狙い通りに鼻が根本からポキリと折れて、<br>日本人らしい容姿に戻ってる杉浦小春の隣に立つ。
 
|I walk up to Sugiura Koharu, whose ego is but<br>a fraction of a fraction of what it was before, and stand beside her.
  
|I walk up to Sugiura Koharu, whose ego is but<br>a fraction of a fraction of what it was before, and stand beside her.
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|Phirb: I see that a lot of meaning is removed from this translation, but ultimately I don't deem it as necessary and could potentially confuse readers, so I'm leaving it as is.}}
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|189||
  
|189||
 
|彼女がホールに立った瞬間、<br>そこまで皆で必死に抑え込んでいた、<br>店内の調和が一気に崩れた。
  
|彼女がホールに立った瞬間、<br>そこまで皆で必死に抑え込んでいた、<br>店内の調和が一気に崩れた。
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|The instant she stepped into the hall, the balance that everyone was trying so hard to maintain simply collapsed.
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|The instant she stepped into the hall, the steady workflow that everyone was trying so hard to maintain simply collapsed.
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|Atmosphere probably isn't the best word. Balance? Pleasant workflow? "Everything was going well until she stepped in"}}
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|Atmosphere probably isn't the best word. Balance? Pleasant workflow? "Everything was going well until she stepped in" *Phirb: Harmony is a better translation of the word, but in English it sounds rather odd, so I'd rather just take one side and change it to steady workflow.}}
   
 
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|211|春希|Haruki
  
|211|春希|Haruki
 
|「…うん」
  
|「…うん」
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|"... True."
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|"...True."
 
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|262||
 
|店を飛び出して、３０秒後に見つけた小さな背中。
  
|店を飛び出して、３０秒後に見つけた小さな背中。
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|About 30 seconds after I dashed out the door, I found who I was looking for.
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|About 30 seconds after I dashed out the door, I spotted her small figure.
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|Originally "found the small back (of who I was looking for)" but sounds kind of stupid. Might be better if some hint of "small" could be incorporated}}
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|Originally "found the small back (of who I was looking for)" but sounds kind of stupid. Might be better if some hint of "small" could be incorporated *Phirb: Agreed, changed it as I think figure is more acceptable than back.}}
   
 
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|268||
 
|…それはつまり、<br>俺がもう、何を言ってもついてくるということを、<br>仕方なしにではあるけど、認めたことになる。
  
|…それはつまり、<br>俺がもう、何を言ってもついてくるということを、<br>仕方なしにではあるけど、認めたことになる。
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|... Which also means she's realized that I'll be following her regardless of what she says.
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|...Which also means she's realized that I'll be following her regardless of what she says.
 
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|279|春希|Haruki
  
|279|春希|Haruki
 
|「どうして今の時期にバイトなんか？」
  
|「どうして今の時期にバイトなんか？」
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|"Why have you been looking for a job?"
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|"Why are you trying to work at this time of the year?"
 
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|280|小春|Koharu
  
|280|小春|Koharu
 
|「…卒業旅行に行くから」
  
|「…卒業旅行に行くから」
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|"... Because I'm going on a graduation trip."
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|"...Because I'm going on a graduation trip."
 
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|285||
 
|最後の一人にタメを作ったことに、<br>別に俺を責め立てる意図はないみたいだった。
  
|最後の一人にタメを作ったことに、<br>別に俺を責め立てる意図はないみたいだった。
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|It it doesn't seem planned to put me on the spot with her little pause before saying the last name.
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|It doesn't seem planned to put me on the spot with her little pause before saying the last name.
 
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|295|春希|Haruki
  
|295|春希|Haruki
 
|「そ、それにしても卒業旅行でバイトかぁ。<br>家の人は出してくれないの？」
  
|「そ、それにしても卒業旅行でバイトかぁ。<br>家の人は出してくれないの？」
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|"S, so you're working to pay for your trip, huh? Your parents can't pay for you?"
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|"S-so you're working to pay for your trip, huh? Your parents can't pay for you?"
 
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|296|小春|Koharu
  
|296|小春|Koharu
 
|「ウチはみんなとは違って一般家庭だし。<br>…他のコたちは出してくれるみたいだけど」
  
|「ウチはみんなとは違って一般家庭だし。<br>…他のコたちは出してくれるみたいだけど」
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|"We're an average, middle-class family. <br>... The other girls' parents seem to be paying for them, though."
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|"We're an average, middle-class family. <br>...The other girls' parents seem to be paying for them, though."
 
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|318|小春|Koharu
  
|318|小春|Koharu
 
|「許して…くれますか？」
  
|「許して…くれますか？」
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|"Could you... Please forgive me?"
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|"Could you... please forgive me?"
 
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|350||
 
|…どうせすぐにもう一度会うことになるんだろうけどな。
  
|…どうせすぐにもう一度会うことになるんだろうけどな。
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|... Even though they'll probably see each other again soon enough.
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|...Even though they'll probably see each other again soon enough.
 
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|363||
 
|だから今は、黙って待つだけだ。
  
|だから今は、黙って待つだけだ。
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|That's why all we need to do is sight tight and wait.
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|That's why all we need to do is sit tight and wait.
 
|}}
  
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